Sorry for the MIA guys, but as you all probably know by now, you simply can't get rid of me.
Okay, I uploaded a new story. Hope sir Jacob and others check it out
This one is a lame duck compared to my first story but I'm sure Sir Graham can fix it in no time. [As far as the first version is concerned, boredom is guaranteed
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Dave - v.1-0
Also I have finished the editing and other tweaks on my first story:
When My Father 'Died' - v.2-0