Thread: MobileRead Short Story Anthology - [DISCUSSION & REVIEW]
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Old 03-19-2014, 03:21 PM   #191
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Cutting it Fine
v1.4

You had me wondering what was going to happen right away. That's good.

What is it about cutting the girls' hair that would ruin their business?

Spoiler:
Marie was in a box? A medical treatment pod?

The ending happened a little suddenly. We had no hint that he could choose to stay. Better if he had decided to leave for all the right reasons, then the sudden epiphany.

Jim
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