View Single Post
Old 03-18-2014, 09:06 PM   #188
Katsunami
Grand Sorcerer
Katsunami ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.Katsunami ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.Katsunami ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.Katsunami ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.Katsunami ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.Katsunami ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.Katsunami ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.Katsunami ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.Katsunami ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.Katsunami ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.Katsunami ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.
 
Katsunami's Avatar
 
Posts: 6,111
Karma: 34000001
Join Date: Mar 2008
Device: KPW1, KA1
Quote:
Originally Posted by gmw View Post
Not sure what you mean here. If you mean insert a "But", then no, I think it works as is.
It is unclear to me how long Vera has been physical at that point in time. It's not clear if there was physical contanct the day before. If there was (or could have been, in some way), 'long time' does not feel correct here.
Katsunami is offline   Reply With Quote