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Originally Posted by arjaybe
v1.8
A cold hand can't say anything. "No, not that one son."
I don't think a friend of a friend would have his mind engulfed by grief.
"both literally and figuratively" not needed.
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True, but again dreams are weird and weird things happen all the time in dreams as I am sure you know (remember it is a dream after all).
[EDIT]
About the 'friend of friend', the mother thinks so, but it is not necessary true. Anyway I changed the line a bit.
Keep the light burning: Literally, self-explanatory; figuratively, it means "don't lose hope". There's some misplacement of words though which I would edit.
Back to work. I won't probably be able to add the edits until Sunday.
