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When My Father Died
v1.8
What gmw said.
I don't think it's necessary to have mother add too much salt.
A cold hand can't say anything. "No, not that one son."
I don't think a friend of a friend would have his mind engulfed by grief.
"both literally and figuratively" not needed.
Why was Mom in her room during shradh?
Rice bowls? balls?
Put punctuation inside quotes. "Like this," he said, "not like this".
Jim
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