Thread: MobileRead Short Story Anthology - [DISCUSSION & REVIEW]
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Old 03-12-2014, 01:35 PM   #130
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Originally Posted by arjaybe View Post
Such imperfection can make the story better.
Noooo. Don't say that. I'm halfway through rewriting it.

We can compare the two versions, see which one we prefer.

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