[mrmarlowe]

Originally Posted by arjaybe

v1.7

The first time you mention Mr Zant it's not clear that he's south-guy. Say his name the first time, and don't call him guy from South after that.

I thought I mentioned this in the very 2nd paragraph:

Spoiler:

Among the crowd was a guy from the South, Mr. Zant; he was a friend of one of my father's friends.

I dunno if we're on the same page about this or or if I missed something.

Fixed the other instances. Now the

Spoiler:

guy from the south

gets mentioned just once.