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Originally Posted by Katsunami
You can say that again.
This is a huge spoiler. If you don't want to spoil a large part of the new version, don't open this. It contains part of one of Graham's suggestions.
Do you have any suggestions regarding the dialog? I think Graham already said everything else.
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I'm sorry. I'm usually good at remembering the spoiler tags.
When I read it today I'll pay special attention to the dialog. I seem to remember some places where it was a bit "lumpy," but thought the little things could wait.
My first reading left me feeling the story was complete, needing only minor adjustments.