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Old 03-11-2014, 11:37 AM   #85
Graham
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Crisis of Faith

One more thing that's just struck me. The story title is Crisis of Faith, so the resolution of this would have most power if it came at the most climactic moment of the story.

Spoiler:
So, do you think Elani's doubts should be dispelled in some way during the fight with the Lich?

Given your comments about this being D&D-style clerical magic this makes sense. Could something click with Elani when she (and Marlena) are all but beaten, and her powers flood back, giving her that last extra boost that she needs to beat the Lich?


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