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Katsunami · 03-10-2014, 12:56 PM

Well, I just realised that version 0.9 doesn't need to be followed by 1.0. I can still use 0.10, 0.11, 0.101... harhar

There are two things I want to edit:
1. As I said, characters taking too many deep breaths.
2. The protagonist maybe cries too much.

I'm not yet sure how much crying I can edit out, as it's... logical, at least in this story.

Small spoiler, character name:

Spoiler:

Graham: you've not read the work in progress, I assume?

After the 0.9 edit this evening, I'll start reading the other stories. Dayum, writing this cost more time than I thought.

03-10-2014, 12:56 PM	#57
Katsunami Grand Sorcerer Posts: 6,111 Karma: 34000001 Join Date: Mar 2008 Device: KPW1, KA1	Well, I just realised that version 0.9 doesn't need to be followed by 1.0. I can still use 0.10, 0.11, 0.101... harhar There are two things I want to edit: 1. As I said, characters taking too many deep breaths. 2. The protagonist maybe cries too much. I'm not yet sure how much crying I can edit out, as it's... logical, at least in this story. Small spoiler, character name: Spoiler: I'm thinking of changing the protagonist's name from Elani to Elina; I always type the latter, if I don't watch out However, I didn't want ALL the names to end in an A... Graham: you've not read the work in progress, I assume? After the 0.9 edit this evening, I'll start reading the other stories. Dayum, writing this cost more time than I thought.