[BeccaPrice]

This is for my Heart of Rock story. People keep getting confused because there are two cities, and people tend to assume that when I talk about the second city that I'm really referring to the first city. There are geographic cues in the story that indicate that the two cities are on opposite sides of a mountain range, but I guess they're too subtle, because just about every beta reader is making the same mistake.

I need a name for either the kingdom or it's capitol city. The city is a walled city with a castle inside it - it backs on mountains, but the other side of the city are rich agricultural lands. The kingdom gets it's wealth both from agriculture and from mines in the mountains.

I'm lousy at thinking up names, but I'm having Rob Antonishen <RobA@cartocopia.com> draw me a map that I hope will help with the confusion, and if I have a map, I'm going to have to have at least a descriptive name. (the city where two rivers meet is The City of Wizards, for example)

*sigh* and I thought this story was in it's final beta form.