doesn't anybody like the tag line:
Two kingdoms in crisis. Two heroes. One magical amulet.
I rather like it.
so far I'm leaning toward Dngrsone's version, maybe with another line added about the Nightmares.
My problem is that I've been not well for quite awhile, and when I'm over-tired, my sentences get so convoluted that even I get lost in them. That's why I'm concentrating on putting out illustrated versions of existing stories for the next 6 months or so - I don't dare do any creative writing.
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