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blurb help please?
for an illustrated story aimed at 6-10year olds
Two kingdoms in crisis. Two opposing heroes. One magical amulet.
Once upon a time, wizards carved hideous gargoyles and brought them to life with the amulet men called the Heart of Rock, to drive away their enemies, the Nightmares. Years pass and the time comes when a brave cobbler must seek out the Heart of Rock to save his kingdom, but by doing so he puts the gargoyle kingdom into crisis, for the gargoyles cannot live without their talisman.
It needs a good punchy end sentence, and the first sentence after the tag line is awfully convoluted. Can someone help me simplify?
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