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Old 01-08-2014, 10:42 PM   #1272
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Originally Posted by kennyc View Post
I like it Sothh! my only quibble is with the word "screams" in S3....seems to me cries might be better.

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A quibble with your quibble, Kenny. I know you're a Pink Floyd fan so think "Dark Side of the Moon", and the screams work - for me at least.

Great job, Sothh, I like it.
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