Okay, I just finished
Mars Girl!
The first thing that comes to mind is: you better be working on the sequel!
It is an extremely fast-paced action thriller taking place in the near future, without being too much of a science fiction story. I'm not a big SF fan.
I love the way you write, I love the short chapters and frequent changes of focus, which make it very fast and hectic but not confusing.
The story is interesting, very gripping, and after a while, one has to think about the role our media plays in the world of today.
I really hope you keep on writing, and since I often grow attached to characters in books, I would definately approve of a sequel
