I agree with the other comments. It contains too much information and repetition. You need to give the potential reader a taste of what may be inside your book, not the whole plot.
I think:
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Traci Matthews is no doughnut-eating bounty hunter. She’s a whiskey-drinking hard-living animal rescue feminist. But she has just this one little problem: she can’t seem to stop killing men.
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could be enough to make me want to read this, coupled with the title.
The rest is waffle and tells me what I want to read in the book, not on the 'cover'.
If you must say more, use a cut-down version of gmw's offering which I think is still too long, but much better than the original.