If this is not just a section out of paragraph with something omitted, why so many links into to one paragraph, including two in one sentence? It is not clear why you even need one anchor per sentence. It seems like an automated program indexed just about everything.
Sigil is useful for this because it shows a list of all the anchor points in reports. It would allow you to delete overlapping ones. In this case, the suggested changes move the return link (from what one assumes is some sort of footnote) to just before the jump link, rather than trying to wrap up the link that jumps to the footnote. As Toxaris said, it is not the same, but a real person should be just fine ending up just before it, especially since you can't wrap one up in the other anyway.
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