Thread: "The Second Book of Memorable First Sentences From Books That Don't Exist"
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Old 11-11-2013, 12:14 PM   #183
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Originally Posted by Graham View Post
A rabbit, a four iron, three onions and an egg whisk; together they held the key to solving the Williams' case.


Graham

Now THAT'S an Indie book: Absurd plot, inane dialogue, creaky logic, asinine transitions, non-existent grammar, and zero proofreading.

(I'm imaging all these things will be there, based upon that first sentence.)

YOU'VE GOT A HIT ON YOUR HANDS! Write it, and I'll buy it!





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