"She came into my office..."
I think we had an entire chapter on this kind of opening, one that I've always liked. Here's a new one:
She came into my office with a Kindle Paperwhite 3g Second Edition in one hand and a Kobo Aura HD in the other hand, while held precariously between the two toes of her left foot a lone Nook Simple Touch With Glowlight resided, looking like an artifact your grandmother might own, all the while that the large big toe of her right foot tapped wantonly on the new Sony PRS T3 in a failed effort to find a non-existent light source, the momentary look of confusion on her face failing to cover her nakedness as she sat down across from my desk and said in a husky voice, “Are you Buster Preston, the private dick?”
Dr. Drib
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