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Old 08-14-2013, 03:38 PM   #24
Gregg Bell
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I'm getting it, crich. Excellent suggestions. Yeah, I was looking at the "inciting incident" the wrong way. (Kind of confusing the inciting incident with the full revelation of the antagonist's dastardly deed.

And I'm realizing now I can have a dramatic showdown ending with the antagonist surviving it.

Thanks for all your help with this.
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