Looks good, but man, he sure drags it out. It really doesn't start until about 12 mins in....
I disagree about 'inspiration hurts your writing' -- He's simply wrong. You ABSOLUTELY SHOULD write when inspired but let it cool and edit just like everything else. But you should never rely on inspiration ONLY as the means to write creatively. If you have inspiration, USE IT!
Definitely some good stuff in the middle.....but yeah I felt it a bit drawn out.
