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Old 08-10-2013, 09:07 AM   #1213
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Originally Posted by Namekuseijin View Post
whoa! never seen this before

I like poetry, but don't usually try in a foreign language... I love haiku, I'll try one in English:



the sound of tires:
the dog goes chasing around
always tirelessly



hope the 5-7-5 metric is right in English. I count 2 for tires, but only 3 for tirelessly. It seems when I pronounce it that "reless" goes in one gulp. is it right?
Good job. I love Haiku. Did you see the Maven Mars Haikus?
(mine got ZERO votes. )

http://lasp.colorado.edu/maven/going...ntest-winners/
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