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Old 08-03-2013, 11:10 AM   #5
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Originally Posted by VydorScope View Post
Interesting... but the scene is one guy says something like "I think we are being watched" and the other is like "Everything here is constantly recorded, both visually and audio."
Why would you say "visually" (an adverb), but "audio" (a noun)? That's just wrong. Either make them both adverbs ("visually and audibly") or both nouns ("video and audio", or "vision and sound").
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