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Old 07-19-2013, 12:34 PM   #28
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This would be an example of present tense writing:

Quote:
I'm sitting at home in my armchair, relaxing. Suddenly the doorbell rings. I get up and answer it - it's my next-door neighbour. "Hello", he says, "how are you today?". "Fine", I reply...
Whereas this would be past tense:

Quote:
I was sitting at home in my armchair, relaxing. Suddenly the doorbell rang. I got up and answered it - it was my next-door neighbour. "Hello", he said, "how are you today?". "Fine", I replied...
I gave up reading Patricia Cornwall's "Kay Scarpetta" series when she started writing in the present tense - I find it virtually unreadable.
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