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Originally Posted by HarryT
You asked in your other thread for feedback on your books. I've read the description of this book on Smashwords, and I won't be downloading it because it has what is for me a fatal flaw - spelling and grammar mistakes in the blurb:
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While piecing together the mysterious events leading up to the crash, and his fiancés death, he tries to find his way to their cabin through the dense woods.
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There are two problems with this:
1. The word "fiancé" means "a man who is about to be married". The equivalent word for a woman is "fiancée" with an extra "e".
2. The apostrophe is the phrase "fiancée's death" is missing. |
There's also an extraneous comma after "crash."