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Old 06-23-2013, 06:38 PM   #11
mukoan
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Cheers guys! What you've all pointed out is that I need to practice recognizing tense in my writing, (along with POV, punctuation, the ability to write coherent sentences... )

Again, thankyou all! I'm off to practice.
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