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Old 06-21-2013, 06:32 AM   #371
tompe
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Really?
Cause I can get a lot more...
...and we are *supposed* to get a lot more.
If there is one thing that writers get hammered into their heads is that you need a strong lead; either a quick hook or a clear narrative voice, preferably both.

One paragraph was all I needed to know that Gaiman's STARDUST was going to be a jewel.
Of course you did not know that. It is a standard technique of authors to spend a lot of time with the first paragraph and the beginning of a book because they know that a lot of people read that in book stores. So you were lucky that the rest of the book held the same standard.
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