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Old 06-14-2013, 02:21 AM   #162
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Originally Posted by Fbone View Post
It is behavior I will not put up with. [Change to:] It is behavior I will not tolerate.

That is a situation I have not thought of. [Chang to:] That is a situation I have not considered.
May be it's just me, but the second variant of the sentences seems more thoughtful, more calm - as if someone actually took the time to construct the sentence in their head before saying it.
(As opposed to just throwing out the words because the message needs to be there RIGHT NOW.)
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