There are definitely aspects of one on the right (the darker background, the larger print) that I think are a distinct improvement over the left, but .... The balance doesn't feel quite right to me - the dropping T and S throw out the balance a little (especially when combined with the background colouring that pushes the same way), and while I like what the 'S's in "Snarls" are trying to portray, I don't think they quite make it. ... Close but perhaps not quite there yet.
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