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Originally Posted by Ken Maltby
OK, as this is "Mobileread" Forums, I guess I should give more consideration to those who are reading on smaller screens, and not format my lines in a manner you of tiny screens may have difficulties with. This approach doesn't help with any tendency I might have for run-on sentences.
Luck;
Ken
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I'll give you the advice my 6th grade teacher gave me....if you can't say it with one breath, it's TOO LONG!!
Actually, it was more like a sadistic demand that I read every sentence she'd marked as too long out loud to her.