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Originally Posted by BeccaPrice
The thing is, none of these blurbs capture the *feel* of the stories, and I don't know how to do that.
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Oh, I don't know.
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Originally Posted by BeccaPrice
What I meant by "timed just right" is that they're a good length for a bedtime story, so that they take about 1/2 hour each to read aloud. That was from one of my beta testers (hi, ApK!) who said that the timing on them was good. but I will take it out.
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No, don't take it out. This might be a language thing, US vs UK english. Timed for me means being at the right time, not being the right length. I'd say something like 'just the right length for a bedtime story'.