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Old 05-24-2013, 08:06 AM   #28
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I had intended to italicize the story titles, but cut and pasted the text from my Notepad++ file, and then forgot to do so here.

The thing is, none of these blurbs capture the *feel* of the stories, and I don't know how to do that.

What I meant by "timed just right" is that they're a good length for a bedtime story, so that they take about 1/2 hour each to read aloud. That was from one of my beta testers (hi, ApK!) who said that the timing on them was good. but I will take it out.

Since I don't have a writer's group (I'm intending to Join SCBWI shortly, when I get some money), I'm depending on people here - maybe depending too much - and over at Kboards for input.
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