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Old 05-21-2013, 11:48 PM   #30
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I like the latest font with the black drop shadow. The combination of changes to the text has cleaned up that "home computer smell" I was getting off the first version.
I like the image without the face or the boot.
While I'm not sure what it has to do with the story, I decided it was a seedy storage unit where Jamie may or may not find something bad her new love is hiding. If I hadn't read the blurb, I may have assumed Jamie was 'gambling' on what was inside.

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