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Old 05-20-2013, 11:47 AM   #2
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Your avatar is from Alice in Wonderland (well, Through the Looking Glass) - pick it up again for inspiration.

You really need to pick specifics that help you define the character that you want for your Prince. Think about how you see him and what sorts of things will help you highlight that. Similarly for the land in which he traveling. Rather than describing the land directly, use incidents and obstacles to impart that information to the reader (so, for example, you may be able to work out some suitable obstacles just by looking over your descriptions).

(Not sure if this is helpful, but the best I can offer at 1:47am.)
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