Excellent job, Radioflyertoo.
This is your baby, but perhaps some considerations on the next one?
1) What if there was a rule that two lines (only) must always have end rhymes?
Or, for example, another suggestion:
2) What if two successive lines were quoted, rather than one.
3) Or maybe 12 lines could equal a stanza (followed by a space separation and then the next stanza).
I enjoyed this, and I want to thank you for coming up with the idea and carrying it through.
Don