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Old 04-25-2013, 07:40 AM   #18
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Been thinking about this some more. Break the amulet, so it seems that everyone will die - the story always has to look hopeless near the end. And then solve the problem with two working together somehow. I know you didn't like the idea of a broken heart, but the symbolism being (perhaps) that you can survive a broken heart however it feels at the time.
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