I want to be very careful not to reward the original theft, but still have group 1 be able to defend themselves against their enemies.
the problem with introducing another group or another amulet is that fairy tales need to be fairly simple.
These are bed-time stories, so they need to be kept fairly short... the other stories in the collection are around 2200 words each; this one I've aimed at having that length be for each of the two parts.
but you've given me some ideas to think about.
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