Much, much more successful than my first attempt at an epub! But you asked for feedback; I've jotted down a few things that I would have done differently. My suggested solutions are terse; I'll expand if they're unintelligible. Good, properly explained solutions are (almost certainly) to be found somewhere on this site, but excavating the thread you need is not always easy...
Presumed typos that popped up:
Quote:
10. "Thou shalt not covet anything that is thy neighbor's."
Oenvy, tho
Thy will, 0(zero) all-gracious Father
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– suggested solution: use a program like gutcheck.
Cover image does not scale – suggested solution: set image width:100%;
Headings/subheadings sometimes appear at bottom of page, with content on next page – suggested solution: set page-break-after:avoid; in stylesheet for h1-4. (May also have something to do with empty <div>s immediately after headings.
Hebrew text images are not centered in Adobe Digital Editions — suggested solution: Search this forum; well known problem.
Hebrew text images do not scale – suggested solution: give width either in % or em, depending on whether you wish the images to scale with display size or font size. Save images in higher resolution, and in a lossless format like png.
Hebrew text images background differs from text background – suggested solution: Use gimp/Photoshop and change background to white or transparent.
Stanzas(?) in prayers split over pages – suggested solution: create class p.stanza {page-break-inside:avoid;} See also various discussions on the forum concerning poetry.
Quotes/dashes given as "/' – suggested solution: replace by “” and ‘’
Concerning hebrew phrases embedded in the text, it is fully possible to have images in a line of text; embed the image in a span, and set the height of the image to 1em.
Finally, my personal preferences for text is to have paragraphs indented instead of separated by space, and to have it justified. But that is definitely a matter of taste.