Hi everyone,
I have recently written a short story and I would appreciate any feedback I can get on it.
Here's the synopsis:
George is 89 years old and on his deathbed. His final wish is for his daughter to sing him this special song so he can remember his past one last time. But when he starts noticing things in his memories that he didn't notice before, things start turning bad for him. Follow George through his memories as a dark secret is revealed in this short story.
You can get it now on Smashwords or KDP for only a dollar.
https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/303673
http://www.amazon.com/Sing-Me-To-Sle...ng+me+to+sleep