Thread: Sci-Fi Book "Siege of Terra" by Robin MacMillan
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Old 04-07-2013, 01:19 PM   #12
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... on second thought, after looking at the Kindle preview... let us know when you've hired a proofreader. Three run-on sentences on the first page tells me I wouldn't get through the first chapter without giving up on the story, no matter how interesting the plot or characters are.
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