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Originally Posted by Blossom
Why was it a DNF? I notice it's not written in First Person which is what I am use to.
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Well, there's a naive heroine, and then there's one who's, hmm, to put it nicely, not the brightest crayon in the box. I was so frustrated with her! And IMO the writing was awkward, like the author was trying way too hard to write something profound and it just never came to fruition. ie "Right there in that moment, the tension in both Gavin and Emily's shoulders-from the way their worlds collided-deflated and vanished like a ghost".
Also, it was very cliche and predictable, just not for me.