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Looks good. A few things jumped out as I paged through it.
Section 1.2
Non-Broadcast networks
Second paragraph not indented.
Designated Router
Paragraph break after "has a Designated Router. The Designated" and also second paragraph not indented.
Section 4.4
Non-broadcast lower-level protocol-support
Paragraph break after "dead neighboring router may be"
Section 4.5
Paragraph break after "capabilities in Database Description packets. A"
I found the ascii art diagrams hard to read, but not much I can think of there, unless you were to embed them as images in the ePub?
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