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Old 03-14-2013, 07:09 AM   #140
Yolina
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Originally Posted by Geralt View Post
With all due respect I think you're nitpicking. One badly constructed sentence regarding climbing or the sound of gunfire (page 8 of this thread) doesn't make bad writing.

If anything, bad writing is consistent through the book. On the other hand even great writers have bad sentence now and then.
Well that's how I am

The sound of gunfire wasn't mine btw, and I would say that the book where I came across the wall climbing thing was acceptable overall in terms of writing, but had enough clumsy sentences to be irritating at times. I prefer not to be irritated by my reading material

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