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Originally Posted by Yolina
Saw this the other day (not an indie book) "he shuffled laterally to his right"  surely shuffling to your right already implies lateral movement...
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Nah, you could shuffle to the right while facing forwards or turn and shuffle to the right - let's you know he's still facing forwards, I'm guessing he's trying to find snack food in a cupboard while hung over

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