$3 for a 19-page book with no cover and no sample. Blurb includes 2nd person POV, a sentence ending with a preposition, and a dangling participle. Title includes a question mark for something that's not a question.
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How to Maintain a Healthy Diet? A step by step guideline for an average person
This book is a great way to improve your diet in some ways in which you have never thought of. Along with learning on improving your diet, facts on why it is a healthier alternative are included in the book. Great deal. Great book.
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Serious advice: Hire an editor. Start with a friend who's good with grammar and punctuation if you can't afford full professional treatment. If you don't have a friend who can and will edit your manuscript, take some composition classes--there are free ones online--before trying to charge people money to read your writing.
I don't care how revolutionary your diet ideas are (and why should I believe they're even interesting, with a title and intro like that?); if you can't structure a coherent paragraph, I'm not going to read what you have to say.