Thread: The Ugliest Truth - Bad Writing
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Old 02-28-2013, 11:10 AM   #88
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I certainly wouldn't have batted an eye at "heart in her throat." Quite a common, perfectly acceptable metaphor/colloquialism, IMO. *shrug*
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