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Originally Posted by Catlady
ApK, I agree with you. Now, a whole series of paragraphs in that vein would be off-putting, but that single paragraph expresses the character, and I would not edit it.
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I'm the same - the paragraph in isolation seems fine to me. Repetition of a word isn't always a bad thing.
But of course, I haven't read the subsequent paragraphs, we could have a whole chapter of "propergation" which would well and truly drive me nuts.