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Originally Posted by Geralt
Robert Stanek - Keeper Martin's Tale
few sample paragraphs from the book:
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“Always more reminders of the things she should or should not do—her proper place, always her proper place. She knew all about the proper things, the proper mannerisms, the proper greetings, her proper duties, her proper place. She had even been taught, though only recently, the proper things to do to invite a man’s attention. She was to begin courting. But why? “
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Perhaps I'm missing something, and I am tired, but I don't see anything especially bad about that paragraph.
Seems to convey a "Marsha Marsha Marsha!" state of mind reasonably well.