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Originally Posted by Joykins
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This is so bad, am confused as to whether it is meant in earnest or is a parody...
Dr. Drib started this thread by giving some examples of bad writing, so here's one from Twilight:
"Aro started to laugh. "Ha, ha, ha," he chuckled."
Talk about redundancy...Meyer has told us three times in one short sentence that Aro was amused. Not a book I'm about to read, but my 12 yo daughter enjoyed the series for a bit, then got bored with it.