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I went and glanced at the excerpt. It was bad. I'd go so far as to say it was atrocious.
I'm not judging the story as a whole, but the level of writing is really low; the author has issues with spelling, grammar, and sentence construction that would produce a failing grade in junior high.
It is not as well-written as "Night Travels of the Elven Vampire."
As for the reviews, they don't show much knowledge of basic writing skills either.
I'm glad I no longer spend much time or money on Smashwords.
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